Comments on: Goodnight Moon: Better sleep tied to better grades

By: Goodnight Moon: Better sleep tied to better grades » The Pioneer … « allbout

Fri, 13 Nov 2009 08:00:20 +0000

[...] Original post by helenjenne [...]

By: Hanna Ory

Hanna Ory — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 20:53:54 +0000

don’t think that the above mentioned quote is counterintuitive: it takes a while for caffeine to kick in, so while you are still tired and waiting for it to hit you, taking a nap can help to make you even more alert when you wake up. This could, however, be clarified.

I also agree about the last quote. It seems kind of random and I don’t really know what he means by saying “you’re jerks.” I think tweaking the ending just a bit would definitely help.

By: Gillian Frew

Gillian Frew — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 17:47:27 +0000

Please see comments in the text.

Also, this seems counterintuitive:

But if you are napping to improve performance in the short run, Simon recommends drinking one or two cups of coffee, and then taking a twenty-minute nap

And the last quote is a little off topic, try to work it in earlier or contextualize it. Thanks!