Comments on: It’s a dance-off: Cakes for CASA looks to help locals http://whitmanpioneer.com/news/greek/2009/11/08/cakes-for-casa-looks-to-help-locals/ The Pioneer | Whitman news, delivered. Wed, 17 Mar 2010 08:38:15 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Galen Bernard http://whitmanpioneer.com/news/greek/2009/11/08/cakes-for-casa-looks-to-help-locals/comment-page-1/#comment-5872 Galen Bernard Tue, 10 Nov 2009 19:17:49 +0000 http://whitmanpioneer.com/?p=10172#comment-5872 actually, Kappa Alpha Theta is a fraternity, I've fixed that language. Copy editors, I've revised significant portions of this article, so it will need to be edited again. I apologize for the extra work. Hold off until I notify you tomorrow because I want to get a quote from someone at the local CASA chapter. Thanks actually, Kappa Alpha Theta is a fraternity, I’ve fixed that language. Copy editors, I’ve revised significant portions of this article, so it will need to be edited again. I apologize for the extra work. Hold off until I notify you tomorrow because I want to get a quote from someone at the local CASA chapter. Thanks

]]> By: Cara Lowry http://whitmanpioneer.com/news/greek/2009/11/08/cakes-for-casa-looks-to-help-locals/comment-page-1/#comment-5830 Cara Lowry Mon, 09 Nov 2009 00:29:51 +0000 http://whitmanpioneer.com/?p=10172#comment-5830 Please check facts better next time. Phi Delta Theta is a fraternity and Kappa Alpha Theta is the Theta sorority. Please check facts better next time.

Phi Delta Theta is a fraternity and Kappa Alpha Theta is the Theta sorority.

]]> By: Josh Goodman http://whitmanpioneer.com/news/greek/2009/11/08/cakes-for-casa-looks-to-help-locals/comment-page-1/#comment-5829 Josh Goodman Sun, 08 Nov 2009 22:13:09 +0000 http://whitmanpioneer.com/?p=10172#comment-5829 Nice work, Eric! I moved up the dance crew part to the beginning since that's the news hook--the thing that's different this year. I think the article flows well, and it looks like you got two good interviews. If you can get a third interview, that would be good--usually three is the minimum, but I understand that you've been sick and it seems that this article can work with two sources. Contacting someone at CASA would be good, though. Kudos for writing your article in spite of being sick. And get well soon! Nice work, Eric! I moved up the dance crew part to the beginning since that’s the news hook–the thing that’s different this year. I think the article flows well, and it looks like you got two good interviews. If you can get a third interview, that would be good–usually three is the minimum, but I understand that you’ve been sick and it seems that this article can work with two sources. Contacting someone at CASA would be good, though.

Kudos for writing your article in spite of being sick. And get well soon!

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